Tuesday 1 October 2013

Presentation

Here is my presentation on Finland:


We got into groups of 8 and presented our presentations to each other in 5 minutes. We also gave each other feedback on these. 

Lizzy

  • Moomins, didn't know thats where it was from or how big it was
  • Cool hotels and glass domes
  • Covered a lot of areas
  • Knew what you was talking about very clear
  • Like the design of the slides
  • Sauna facts where funny + silly events
  • Should have said why you liked it


Joe

  • Good info
  • Research in depth - feel like I know better
  • Liked the silly facts!


Melissa

  • Very interesting presentation
  • Thoroughly researched and good connection to design work
  • Well presented
  • Info seems to be well understood as you didn't rely on the power point at all


Jane

  • Interesting visual presentation with bullet point backed up with confident talk covering very wide range of info about the country.
  • Thoroughly researched
  • You've sold it to me!


Sarah

  • Super in depth research
  • Deep understanding of the subject
  • Good broad range of subjects
  • Could narrow it down to a single of few subjects


Jordan

  • Presentation is visually engaging good use of pictures
  • Informative, good variety of facts
  • Covered all important points of interest that Finland has to offer


Amy

  • Very engaging through a wide range of key information
  • Covers a broad range of unique and unusual facts
  • Entertaining and unusual - tempting to visit Finland!


We then picked out parts of the feedback into different sections.

Feedback I like to hear

  • 'moomins, didn't know thats where it was from or how big it was' - nice to tell something someone didn't know beforehand.
  • 'very interesting presentation'
  • 'thoroughly researched - you've sold it to me!'
  • 'entertaining and unusual - tempting to visit Finland'
  • 'very engaging through a wide range of key information'
  • 'well presented'


Feedback that could help with more info

  • 'informative, good variety of facts'
  • 'good info'


Feedback that did help

  • 'should have said why I liked it'
  • 'could narrow it down to a single of few subjects'
  • people liked the unusual/unique facts so know what was interesting about it


3 Objectives on how to improve Summer Brief

  • Pick a subject and focus more on that
  • Relate more to Graphic Design
  • Talk about why I liked the subject