We got into groups of 8 and presented our presentations to each other in 5 minutes. We also gave each other feedback on these.
Lizzy
- Moomins, didn't know thats where it was from or how big it was
- Cool hotels and glass domes
- Covered a lot of areas
- Knew what you was talking about very clear
- Like the design of the slides
- Sauna facts where funny + silly events
- Should have said why you liked it
Joe
- Good info
- Research in depth - feel like I know better
- Liked the silly facts!
Melissa
- Very interesting presentation
- Thoroughly researched and good connection to design work
- Well presented
- Info seems to be well understood as you didn't rely on the power point at all
Jane
- Interesting visual presentation with bullet point backed up with confident talk covering very wide range of info about the country.
- Thoroughly researched
- You've sold it to me!
Sarah
- Super in depth research
- Deep understanding of the subject
- Good broad range of subjects
- Could narrow it down to a single of few subjects
Jordan
- Presentation is visually engaging good use of pictures
- Informative, good variety of facts
- Covered all important points of interest that Finland has to offer
Amy
- Very engaging through a wide range of key information
- Covers a broad range of unique and unusual facts
- Entertaining and unusual - tempting to visit Finland!
We then picked out parts of the feedback into different sections.
Feedback I like to hear
- 'moomins, didn't know thats where it was from or how big it was' - nice to tell something someone didn't know beforehand.
- 'very interesting presentation'
- 'thoroughly researched - you've sold it to me!'
- 'entertaining and unusual - tempting to visit Finland'
- 'very engaging through a wide range of key information'
- 'well presented'
Feedback that could help with more info
- 'informative, good variety of facts'
- 'good info'
Feedback that did help
- 'should have said why I liked it'
- 'could narrow it down to a single of few subjects'
- people liked the unusual/unique facts so know what was interesting about it
3 Objectives on how to improve Summer Brief
- Pick a subject and focus more on that
- Relate more to Graphic Design
- Talk about why I liked the subject